* Polk, William T. wrote:
10.1. Media sub-type
Type name: application
Subtype name: thraud+xml
Required parameters: none.
Optional parameters: same as the charset parameter of application/xml as specified in [RFC3023].
This should be something like Optional parameters: 'charset': same as the charset parameter of application/xml as specified in [RFC3023].
Encoding considerations: same as encoding considerations of application/xml as specified in [RFC3023].
Security considerations: this registration has all of the security considerations described in [RFC3023] in addition to those in section 9, above.
I think this would read better if you change the order (you start with the generic security considerations and then add new ones).
Interoperability considerations: this registration has all of the interoperability considerations described in [RFC3023].
If there are no known interoperability issues with the new type, it should mention that, for example, "None beyond those in ...".
Published specification: the media type data format is defined in this specification.
You might consider using "RFC XXXX (this document)" or somesuch instead.
Applications that use this media type: transaction and authentication fraud analysis and reporting applications and risk-based transaction and authentication evaluation applications.
Additional information Magic number(s): none File extension: .tfi Macintosh file type codes: none
Person and email address to contact for further information: D M'Raihi, dmraihi@verisign.com
It is customary to use the syntax "Name <address>".
Intended usage - LIMITED USAGE
"LIMITED USE" is the correct phrase here. (Also note the formatting problem, it should use a colon, not a dash).
Restrictions on usage: thraud media are intended for no usage other than the exchange of fraud intelligence data.
Given that all media types are intended only for some purposes, I do not think this should be here (or if there is some particular restriction, it should be discussed in greater detail).
Author: D M'Raihi
Change controller: D M'Raihi
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